By Finley Caisse

I see a Toubab on the beach 

he drinks a soda,

Sip after sip he enjoys the taste,

He throws the bottle away,

—

on his table sits a bottle cap,

No larger than my fingernail,

on it a senegalese gazelle stands,

its print frozen in time,

a deep green color glistening in the sunset 

—

this is *your* bottle cap,

and its like all the others 

but this one i say, 

this one is special to you

—

keep the cap, or don’t

but let it be a reminder,

of where you came from

its life holds a story just like yours,

it came to you in its own special way

—

its metal formed from mother earth,

mined by humanity,

molded by machine,

enjoyed by you.

—

but when you opened the bottle.

your stories crossed,

now think of yourself,

you are just like this cap,

what is your life story?

—

you came from a loving mother,

raised by family,

molded by society,

enjoying life.

—

Look at the ones I’ve collected,

different countries,

different continents,

we all share and tell stories,

my friends from senegal are just like you.

—

they come from loving mothers

raised by villages two thousand strong,

molded by religion and tradition,

they hold their own stories.

—

Griots told these stories of senegal,

they were sacred storytellers,

they live forever,

deep in the Baobob trees

—

I am the last Griot, i would like your cap,

I will hold onto yours,

to remember your life story. 

—

because thats what’s special,

your story to be told.

—

In the baobab tree, forever old.   


3 responses to “In the Baobab Tree, Forever Old”

  1. haleywil Avatar
    haleywil

    Amazing! Thank you for your beautiful poem, Finley.

  2. Portia Carey Avatar
    Portia Carey

    This is beautiful Finley

  3. Steve Carozza Avatar
    Steve Carozza

    Finley, your poem is remarkably insightful, weaving together observation, symbolism, and reflection in a way that reveals how deeply you engaged with this experience. I’m continually impressed by the intelligence and openness you bring to immersive travel, and the way you transform what you see into thoughtful stories that honor the people and places around you.
    Please wash the face mask before you return it! (Kidding…keep it.)
    I miss you.
    Enjoy the moments…
    ~ Sensei Steve

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